in difficult situation , some people react calmy while others react with panic . how to you react in different situation , use specific details and example to support your answer
People face difficult horrible status in our lives such as work , at home ----extra. This is hard time need to calm down for responding to it. I adopt this way in solving problem.In fact have advantage as i illustrated below.
In fact, calm down help people to think and to get alternative solution for the problem . for instant, you differ from them and take the best one.This is procedure needs calm and patient. As getting the incorrect solution increase risk and loss.
In addition, react with panic lead to suffer from lot of pains. Go further, people act in such way come unfriendly, be cause they make ways that can get relationship sad and indeed give up their friendly.
At end, people must act calmy, act without panic to get the decision . they avoid being unfriendly People face difficult horrible status in our lives for example in work , at home ----extra. This is hard time need to calm down for responding to it. I adopt this way in solving problem.In fact have advantage as i illustrated below.
In fact, calm down help people to think and to get alternative solution for the problem . for instant, you differ from them and take the best one.This is procedure require calm and patient. As getting the incorrect solution increase risk and loss.
In addition, react with panic lead to suffer from lot of pains. Go further, people act in such manner come unfriendly, be cause they make ways that can get relationship sad and indeed give up their friendly.
At end, people must be calm, act without panic to get the decision . they avoid being unfriendly by using calm response. they will not loss money and position when suffer difficult situation
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, for example, in addition, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1374.0 1977.66487455 69% => OK
No of words: 288.0 407.700716846 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77083333333 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48007469893 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 212.727598566 53% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.388888888889 0.524837075471 74% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 407.7 618.680645161 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.0806441638 48.9658058833 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 68.7 100.406767564 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4 20.6045352989 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 5.45110844103 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.53405017921 154% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 23.0 5.5376344086 415% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129152373954 0.236089414692 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0468786718779 0.076458572812 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0529495007583 0.0737576698707 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0734633966583 0.150856017488 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.032019915313 0.0645574589148 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 11.7677419355 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 58.1214874552 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.1575268817 63% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.79 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.41 8.01818996416 80% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 86.8835125448 44% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 10.247311828 59% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.