the pie charts below show the persons arrested in the past five years, and the bar chart shows the reasons for most recent arrest in 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given pie charts illustrate the rate of women and men apprehending during the 5-year period. The bar chart witnesses how many female and male make a range of offenses.
From the pie charts, a number of difference between two groups can be seen. 91% of females was arrested rather than 68% of males. In contrast, the percentage of men was not caught was higher than that of women by a margin of 21%.
Whereas females appear to commit a crime during drinking in public than the other gender by 6%, men was arrested by drink-driving which doubled the number of women in same situation. When it comes to breach of order, the same pattern is repeated. the difference is more pronounced with 17% males committing breach of order as appose to approximately 11% of female.
In contrast, the proportion of women being caught by assault was higher than that of men, which made up nearly 20% and 16% respectively. As regards other reasons, both of genders are almost equal.
- Computers have been widely used in our daily life. How important is the computer in the development of modern society? 67
- The diagram shows how liquid domestic and industrial wastes are recycled 55
- the pie charts below show the persons arrested in the past five years, and the bar chart shows the reasons for most recent arrest in 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 11
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 249, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...of order, the same pattern is repeated. the difference is more pronounced with 17% ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, whereas, as regards, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 805.0 965.302439024 83% => OK
No of words: 170.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73529411765 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59133504222 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617647058824 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 239.4 283.868780488 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.3071794837 43.030603864 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.5 112.824112599 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 22.9334400587 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.23603664747 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.078414427299 0.215688989381 36% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0339196929115 0.103423049105 33% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.042028159011 0.0843802449381 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.053607042193 0.15604864568 34% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0550912359426 0.0819641961636 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.2329268293 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 61.2550243902 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 11.4140731707 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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