some people believe that it is good to do multiple jobs,while others believe that it is better to focus on one job?Do you agree or disagree?

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... they has not good collection than they has doing many jobs.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, lastly, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, therefore, thus, well, whereas, while, for example, for instance, i reckon, i think, no doubt, as well as, it is true

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 24.0651302605 195% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1584.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01265822785 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17893568828 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566455696203 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 52.0 20.2975951904 256% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 190.766582212 49.4020404114 386% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 264.0 106.682146367 247% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 52.6666666667 20.7667163134 254% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 32.5 7.06120827912 460% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 43.0 5.01903807615 857% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203790507828 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126259552401 0.084324248473 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106403674711 0.0667982634062 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123824512867 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0716567407537 0.056905535591 126% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 28.5 13.0946893788 218% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 27.16 50.2224549098 54% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.4 11.3001002004 198% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.67 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.56 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.0 9.78957915832 286% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 22.8 10.1190380762 225% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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