Student should live with parents or live away when studying at university. Agree or disagree?
In this day and age, while various people opine that students should dwell far away from home when studying at university, others claim that living with family would be more reasonable. In my perspective, I partly concur with such opinion.
My agreement with inhabiting with father and mother is ostensibly attributable to some factors. The most conspicuous one is that student would still enjoy the comfortable life, the life having a sufficiency of matter and spirit. Furthermore, living with family when studying at university could help students to save an enormous amount of cost such as the rent and daily expenditure. Additionally, they would be still cared thoughtfully and instructed meticulously by their parents.
Notwithstanding the aforementioned reasons, the fact that students do not reside near their parents has plausibly brought about a great number of merits. Firstly, dwelling far away of students is a good way in order to hone independent competence and improve their maturity. Particularly, monthly, their parents could only supply a fixed financial subsidy, the aid covering totally their student life. This means that they must balance themselves their own expenses. Such fact might contribute to helping them to manage easily personal finance. Besides, manifold students tend to work a part-time job, thereby earning money and ameliorating their vital soft skills, communication, time management and teamwork, for example. Secondly, in the new environment, students might have chances to strike up a friendship with people, hence consolidation of social relationships. Regarding the last advantage, students studying at universities which locate in big cities could possess better job opportunities with promising remuneration and higher standard of living after graduation.
For the foregoing discussions, it is clear that students should live away from home when studying at university, because this brings a plenty of benefits for them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, still, well, while, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1677.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.62751677852 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04784638656 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.657718120805 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 506.7 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.8449794415 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.8 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8666666667 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.46666666667 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.375940504505 0.244688304435 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108398900799 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116079691276 0.0667982634062 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.262958416749 0.151304729494 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.074639745785 0.056905535591 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.37 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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