You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The table below shows the sales at a small restaurant in a downtown business district.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
You should write at least 150 words.
Sales: week of October 7-13
Mon.
Tues.
Wed.
Thus.
Fri.
Sat.
Sun.
Lunch
$2,400
$2,450
$2,595
$2,375
$2,500
$1,950
$1,550
Dinner
$3,623
$3,850
$3,445
$3,800
$4,350
$2,900
$2,450
the map shows the two alternatives being considered by Brandfield's city planners to build a brand new shopping mall for the area.
The first alternative, labeled s1 in the map, is crossing the railways tracks just north of the city centre. This area limits to the east with the river and to west with the housing estate at the north of the urban area. it close the Brandfield's main road that goes from north-east to the south, passing beside the golf park and park.
s2, or the second proposed location is to the far south of the city centre. Across the railway from Brandfield's industrial estate. it is close to the city's secondary road that goes from west to east, connecting the industrial estate with the main road.
s1 is closer to where people live and also has acces to the main road. On the contrary, s2 is near the industrial estate and has access only to a secondary road that connects with the main road. s1 is also nearer the city centre.
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| 2019-11-22 | marin123 | 67 | view |
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| 2019-11-04 | Shweta sahu | 56 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
the map shows the two alternatives being co...
^^^
Line 3, column 223, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...estate at the north of the urban area. it close the Brandfields main road that go...
^^
Line 3, column 226, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'closes'?
Suggestion: closes
...ate at the north of the urban area. it close the Brandfields main road that goes fro...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: S2
...ssing beside the golf park and park. s2, or the second proposed location is to ...
^^
Line 5, column 132, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...way from Brandfields industrial estate. it is close to the citys secondary road th...
^^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: S1
...dustrial estate with the main road. s1 is closer to where people live and also...
^^
Line 7, column 196, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: S1
... road that connects with the main road. s1 is also nearer the city centre.
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, second, so, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 787.0 965.302439024 82% => OK
No of words: 173.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.54913294798 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35710608151 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 91.0 106.607317073 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.526011560694 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 225.0 283.868780488 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.2691541299 43.030603864 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.7 112.824112599 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3 22.9334400587 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.23603664747 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.09268292683 244% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0462522539457 0.215688989381 21% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.019756389292 0.103423049105 19% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.020111260881 0.0843802449381 24% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0297973449557 0.15604864568 19% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.011669470527 0.0819641961636 14% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 13.2329268293 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 61.2550243902 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.3012195122 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.81 11.4140731707 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.13 8.06136585366 88% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.