You and your family have just rented an apartment and one or two problems occurred. Write a letter to the landlord.
– Describe the problems.
– Tell him what you want him to do.
Dear Mr. Gaur,
Hope you are doing great. We have just shifted to your apartment at Raj Nayar this week and discovered a few inconveniences which I would like to bring to your notice.
The first issue is that the sink in the kitchen is dripping. Every time we use the sink, it gets clogged and water starts dripping. It is quite stinky as well. It looks like a drainage system obstruction. The second concern is that the flush of the bathroom attached with the kids’ room is out-of-order. It could either be due to a damaged pipe or hindrance in the flow of water in the tank.
Both these problems are causing a lot of inconvenience for my family and need your immediate attention. I request you to look into this matter and take the proper action at the earliest possible.
I look forward to receiving a prompt response.
Yours sincerely
Kritika Gupta
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, second, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 721.0 937.175257732 77% => OK
No of words: 154.0 206.0 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68181818182 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52273666998 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62884379524 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 127.690721649 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.688311688312 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 215.1 290.88556701 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.5123318927 44.8134815571 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 60.0833333333 76.5299724578 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.8333333333 16.8248392259 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.41666666667 4.34317383033 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131781535854 0.216113520407 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0362297872629 0.0766984524023 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0467105335658 0.0603063233224 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0715510502641 0.12726935374 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0760934453637 0.0580467560999 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.0 8.37731958763 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.98 8.71597938144 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.41 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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