In many countries,people have more health problems because they choose to live an unhealthy lifestyle.
Why do you think people are living in an unhealthy way?
What can be done about this problem?
Health is an asset which should be preserved in order to cherish longevity and a disease-free life. However, people in many countries, especially developed ones, choose to live not so healthy lifestyle nowadays. This essay will discuss the reasons behind this phenomenon, and will also try to find some feasible solutions to address this adverse trend in the ensuant paragraphs.
To begin with, modern generation is an 'indoor generation' who like to confine themselves behind the four walls of their homes in order to enjoy the materialistic comforts of this contemporary world. They like couching in front of their television sets and computer screens rather than going out and socialize. Not only they have chosen a sedentary lifestyle for themselves but also consuming excessive fast food in their daily lives. The younger generation, especially school children, are attracted towards fast foods, like hamburgers and pizzas, which contain a high amount of sugar and fatty acids. This leads to various ailments, such as obesity and cardio problems, making consumers more disease prone.
Nevertheless, as every problem has a solution, this menace too could be addressed with the joint efforts of people and administrative authorities. Governments should sensetiz their citizens about the benefits of living a healthy lifestyle through advertising and proclamations. Moreover, authorities should develop new facilities, such as gymnasiums, swimming pools and recreational centres, so that people adapt to a more active lifestyle without hesitation. Citizens should also utilise these facilities proactively, that are provided for their own benefit. What is the meaning of offering these all amenities, if people are not using it wholeheartedly? Finally, youngsters should desist themselves from consuming fatty foods which are detrimental to their health . As a result, the health of people will improve considerably in the coming times.
In conclusion, this essay argued that people are becoming unhealthy due to their sedentary living-style chosen by themselves, and this stumbling block could be removed only with the joint efforts of both governments and citizens.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2019-06-03 | singla_mba2007 | 89 | view |
- People spend more money today than they did in the past and buy more things Do you think this is a positive or negative development 89
- Some people believe that everyone should be free to make their own lifestyle choices, even if those choices are unhealthy. Other people think that the government should intervene to influence people’s choices, for example by putting high taxes on unheal 67
- You have been invited to a music concert You are unable to go due to some reason Write a letter to your friend In your letter Explain why don t you want to attend the concert Thank your friend for invitation Give an alternative solution 73
- Some people believe that sport is an essential part of school life. Others feel it should be purely optional. Discuss both sides and give your opinion. 89
- Your friend moved into new home You want to give him her a present Write a letter Describe the present Tell why you want to give this present How will it be delievered to him her 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 766, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ds which are detrimental to their health . As a result, the health of people will ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, in conclusion, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1849.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.62006079027 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95997946286 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61094224924 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 563.4 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.0468006518 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.5625 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5625 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.9375 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239215146581 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0700765606757 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0524397842981 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142408019807 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0453651804164 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.32 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.67 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.