In the modern society, some people think that people are becoming more and more independent, while other people believe that they are more dependent. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
There is a controversial view about whether modern people become more and more independent or dependent. In this essay, I will examine both sides of the debate and give my own opinion.
There are several reasons why some people reckon that modern people become more independent nowadays. First, more and more people choose to live alone in modern cities to seek higher-salary jobs. Due to better opportunities in mega cities, young people leave away from their family and live in an unfamiliar environment which may push them to make decision on their own. Second, people live independently in order to cultivate their interests. Leaving away from family members who may often make comments on their hobbies, people can have enough freedom to enjoy what they like without parents’ chatter, in which way they can develop their own interests whatever they like.
On the other hand, however, it is reasonable that others think that modern people are more dependent than they used to be. They point that because of their complicated work, people need to rely on others. For example, people may face some work they could not finish in their copanies, while someone may finish them easily and quickly. At that time, the most efficient way to deal with this situation is to cooperate with each other as a team and then all members finish different parts they are good at.
To summarize, there is no doubt that modern people become more independent because their needs of finding satisfying jobs and cultivating interests. However, sometimes, people still need to rely on others if their work is beyond their abilities. Therefore, I hold the view that modern people are more and more independent.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, second, so, still, then, therefore, while, for example, no doubt, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1423.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04609929078 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52995981095 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.563829787234 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.0779936355 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.642857143 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1428571429 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.71428571429 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.487708910011 0.244688304435 199% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.206959419001 0.084324248473 245% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.144670160258 0.0667982634062 217% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.335369454139 0.151304729494 222% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0655840870698 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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