Some people think that the government is wasting money on the arts and this money could be better spent elsewhere. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
Art has been playing a vital role in our society with the culture. Authorities are draining wealth by spending on art and this amount can be utilized in other activities is believed by some individuals. However, I am of the opinion, that art has been useful and important segment of our life and the government should encourage people to develop skills in various segments of art.
Firstly, beautiful representation on sculptures and historical buildings show vital and valuable art is in our community, therefore, the government must make budget on art and motivate individuals. Historical buildings such as Taj Mahal in India is one the great example of importance of art in Muslim culture. The beauty of Taj Mahal is quite popular since its construction from ancient time and it still holds the position of one of the best monuments in the world.
Secondly, it involves business and income for many individuals by attracting rich people. Art in the form of painting has always been popular choice among royal kings and thus gives business to an artist. Paintings of a popular artist like M F Hussein are always costly and hence its exhibitions raise funds which are being used in various communities to feed. In addition to that, various individuals choose art as a profession by showing own skills. Hence, government should equally promote as compared with other subjects.
In summary, art is a necessary subject in our society, and it plays a key role in representing culture and act as a source of income for an artist. Thus, government must provide resource to promote and support the subject.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, thus, in addition, in summary, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1343.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99256505576 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81198201485 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579925650558 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.956753061 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.307692308 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6923076923 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.76923076923 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123183386482 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0432937016549 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0348277365204 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0742149868718 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0421015174518 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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