News plays an important part of most people's lives. Why is news so important to people? Why is so much news dedicated to bad news? Should the news focus on good news instead?
As the connectivity has reached to the remotest parts of the globe, therefore, the news too has started becoming an important part of human lives as people are becoming more curious about the happening in the globe. it keeps people up to date not only in farthest corners of the country but in the metro cities as well. additionally news updates on weather help to provide the latest updates to the local population so they can safeguard themselves from natural disasters like flooding, earthquakes and Tsunami. For instance news content on the latest storm, "Maya" helped protect thousands of lives in the coastal belt of India.
however, an interesting fact has emerged in the past few decades whereby news channels or media houses have only focused on bad news. most of the channels broadcasted on the television show acts of crime like murder, communal riots, robbery and rape which tend to provide the highest television rating points. Although such news content most of the times attains the highest viewership as most of the people are interested in gossip however on the other band they tend to forget how such negative content will affect them and their family in the longer run. For instance, the recent mass shooting by youths in the United States is a clear example of how negative news affected the minds of juveniles thus leading them to a wrong path. additionally, a similar instance on fighting on some penny things between people once televised have led to communal riots.
Lastly, In my opinion, news channels and media houses have a greater role to play in televising good news as it will bring harmony to the human society. additionally, positive news like plantation of trees in the dry region by the Government in India has led local villages councils to take this initiative further by planting more trees thus making this a successful venture. Similarly, news about cleanliness drive of Ganges river in India has led to a positive development whereby various NGO have come together and started an initiative to further help clean the river therefore in my opinion news from media agencies should focus on good news.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, lastly, may, similarly, so, therefore, thus, well, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 41.998997996 148% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1799.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 361.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98337950139 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61526654366 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554016620499 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 566.1 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.7756503323 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 149.916666667 106.682146367 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.0833333333 20.7667163134 145% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.397669411946 0.244688304435 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135814003927 0.084324248473 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0893735270032 0.0667982634062 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.256301373198 0.151304729494 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0314204501015 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.2 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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