Some people believe that employment over the age of 60 is not right and creates lots of problems. So people should retire after 60 and not work.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
People more than 60 or more are considered as Senior citizens and given alot of priviledges which young and adults are unable to receive. There can be certainly many reasons why most of the countries ask people who are above 60 to retire and rest because body becomes weak at this age. In my opinion, It is good for person above 60 to get retirement at this point and focus on their health which helps them to live longer.
People, these days are relying on their memories to work on intricated tasks which deprives with the age. Moreover in fields like medical, engineering, astronomy and etc., we need people who has sharp memory to excel in these fields and aids to formulate new ways of doing things. For example, Technologies like web application development, is on rapid change i.e there are the different tools in market which after a few years becomes deprecated so we need yound and dynamic people to be a part of these sectors to thrive on success.
However, If we do have experience people in the sectors like medical, engineering , telecommunication and etc. , supports the system in much reliable and professional way. They can predict the unforeseen events before it can happen which may saves millions-of-dollar. But with the advent of technology, the tools and elementary knowledge are getting broader which with certain techniques can be well understand amd memorize thoroughly and it requires new brain to become an expert in lesser time.
In conclusion, the employment should be allowed till the age of 60 so that people can enjoy their rest of the life with friends and family. The convoluted works which needs more research should be assigned to young trained people so that they can perform their task with newly created or formulated technologies. By teaching computers, we can give rest to our older generation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, moreover, so, well, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1534.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93247588424 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7854771426 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607717041801 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.7967735413 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.0 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9230769231 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.46153846154 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199219682931 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0719431664582 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0629445915667 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122993711005 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0596681034233 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.