Some people believe that raising the cost of fuel is one of the best ways to solve the environmental problems.
Do you agree or disagree with this view
Environmental issues have become a significant problem due to the development in industry, toxic gases released by vehicles and other factors. Some people believe that raising the fuel price can help to tackle these issues since most people can not be able to drive. I think costly fuel can help to reduce the air pollution and traffic congestion to some extent. However, all environmental problems can not be addressed by this way.
Admittedly, increased cost of fuel can curtail the number of people who use their own cars on a daily basis. Some people can not purchase the fuel to recharge their vehicles due to the cost. This, in turn, encourages them to apply for public transportation. As these vehicles can carry a number of people in a single travel, traffic jam and air pollution as well can be reduced.
However, there are many other environmental issues that should be tackled. Water pollution and global warming are the most common ones among them. These are the issues that requires urgent remedy. In some countries, people suffer from scarce water sources, as tonnes of garbage are thrown into the oceans. These are contaminating the drinking water, making it unavailable to use. Moreover, some countries are too hot to live because of the increased carbon dioxide which are caused by lack of green areas.
To sum up, costly fuel can aid to reduce the amount of air pollution and traffic on roads urging people to utilize the public transportation. However, i argue that it is not the most efficient method to cover all the problems that the public are suffering since there are many other major concerns to be tackeled, such as water scarcity and global warming.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, so, well, as to, i think, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1396.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89824561404 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60141780128 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.522807017544 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.737370242 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.25 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8125 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.1875 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190531170431 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0668184377185 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0561834004782 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118395236467 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0572573477819 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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