Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your houseflat.
Write a letter to your neighbours. In your Letter
• Explain the reasons for the noise
• Apologise
• Describe what action you will take
Dear Annie,
Thank you for the letter stating your concerns on the noise from my houseflat. I really regret on the inconvinience I have made during the week due to high noise from my house.
I would like to make your attention on the reason behind the loud noise inside my house over the past few days. There was a water leak in my bathroom tap for a two months of time, eventhough I have informed my landloard to fix it for several times. However, he has sent a workman last Monday to fix it. Therefore, the workman informed me on the necessity of removing the wall tiles of the bathroom to find the place of the water leak. That process gave an irritating sound which might have disturbed all the neighbourhood and made them to make complains on me to the local authorities as well.
In order to mitigate the noise I have asked them to use another type ofequipment and also requested to complete the work by this Friday. Besides that, I have asked them to continue their work during the day time where most of the people are out of their residences.
Once again, I apologize for all the inconveniences I made, and I will promise you to solve this problem by end of this week.
Best Regads,
Charani
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, however, really, so, therefore, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 26.3917525773 144% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 993.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 222.0 206.0 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.47297297297 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47733414819 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603603603604 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 316.8 290.88556701 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 38.4537932443 44.8134815571 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.2727272727 76.5299724578 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1818181818 16.8248392259 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.63636363636 4.34317383033 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224394174345 0.216113520407 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0779668268756 0.0766984524023 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10491731386 0.0603063233224 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137122552096 0.12726935374 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107894122854 0.0580467560999 186% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 8.37731958763 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.65 8.71597938144 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.19 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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