Human activity has had a negative impact on plants and animals around the world. Some people think that this cannot be changed, while others believe actions can be taken to bring about a change.
Discuss both and give your opinion.
There is an issue about the detrimental effect people cause on the ecosystem. Some ecologists believe that this influence is permanent, while others disagree and argue that people still can improve the situation. This essay agrees with the idea of improvement.
Let us start with reasons why some ecologists say that it is too late to safe the other species. To begin with, the population of the world is growing. According to sociologists, in five years the number of people will reach eight billion people, which means extra two billion in such a short period of time. To satisfy their needs, governments will have to develop more natural habitant and displace other species. Another reason is that many areas are heavily contaminated. Humans have polluted many lands so strongly that they cannot sustain any forms of life for hundreds of years, such as dumps of household and nuclear waste. Furthermore, most of the flora and fauna is on the verge of extinction. Agriculture and poaching have made such many species endangered, that it is hardly possible to revive them to the former sizes.
However, other ecologists claim that all harmful effect of humans on the environment is reversible. They justify their point of view with the following arguments. Firstly, the usage of alternative sources of energy should be dominate. To generate both electricity and heat, people ought to exploit sun energy and wind power rather than burn fossil fuels, thereby stopping the pollution of the natural areas with deadly gases. Secondly, the purification of ecosystem is necessary. Many areas of land and water need cleaning from garbage, toxic waste and oil spills, so that animals and plants can thrive there. Finally, governments should protect natural habitats. To fight poaching and illegal disposal, countries should impose laws and organize groups, which are intended to punish those, who damage the environment as well as its living creatures.
In conclusion, although some ecologists are pessimistic about changing human attitude towards animals and plants, I think that people should take actions and save them for future generations.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 294, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...means extra two billion in such a short period of time. To satisfy their needs, governments wi...
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Line 5, column 226, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'dominated'?
Suggestion: dominated
...alternative sources of energy should be dominate. To generate both electricity and heat,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, well, while, i think, in conclusion, such as, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1804.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 343.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25947521866 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62179377188 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629737609329 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 560.7 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.2512953194 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.2 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.15 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.55 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179273018284 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0427108765806 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.049921155724 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118894027462 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.050827422635 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.93 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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