Many museums and historical sites are mostly visited by foriegn tourists, but not by local people. Why do you think it happens ?
What can be done to attract local people to these sites?
Historical places and museums are sources of attraction mostly for international visitors, however, native people pay a rare visit to these places. The lack of
new
attractive sources and high entry charges are the reasons behind the little interest of local people for these sites. Some measures need to be taken at the
government
level to encourage natives to visit cultural sites
To begin with, first and the foremost reason for the less visit of local people to museums and historical places is that people feel bored while visiting such places.
In other words, natives are mostly familiar with the history of historical buildings and visiting the same sites is considered a waste of time by them. Moreover,
the
traditional artworks in museums are generally admired by tourists only, due to lack of new sources of attraction the repetitive visits of natives to these places generate a feeling of boredom. Secondly, the museums and historical sites charge high entry fees for every visit, this discourages the local visitors to spend money on visiting these places. For instance, a famous cultural site named 'Sada Pind' charges Rs.1000 for each visitor, for this reason, the natives avoid spending this much amount on every visit.
There are some possible solutions that can be taken by authorities to generate interest among people for historical places and museums. Primarily, to make these
places
more attractive for local visitors cultural events, exhibitions and animated shows should be organized by the government. To exemplify, in the famous temple
'Akshardham'
the laser show is performed that describes different religious stories, this inculcates the curiosity for visiting the place among natives. Next, there should be free entry passes for the native people on some specific days, this will encourage people to visit these places. For example, the National Museum in Delhi offers free visits on weekends for local people, this helps people to collect some useful information.
To conclude, the local people offer less interest in visiting historical places and museums, as they do not gather any new information from these places. To make
these
places more alluring, interesting events need to be organized and free entry passes should be given to native people. If these steps are taken, this will not only increase the local visits but also enhances foreign tourism.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
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Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2045.0 1615.20841683 127% => OK
No of words: 383.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33942558747 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42384287591 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50244990363 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.485639686684 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 649.8 506.74238477 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
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Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
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What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
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Sentence topic coherence: 0.132852071833 0.084324248473 158% => OK
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Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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