Due to the development and rapid expansion of supermarkets in some countries, many small, local businesses are unable to compete. Some people think that the closure of local business will bring about the death of local communities.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
There is an issue about the effect of retail centers on congregations in the rural regions. Some social workers argue this effect is devastating, while the managers of these centers believe it is beneficial. This essay agrees with the idea of negative impact.
Let us start with the reasons why some social workers claim that towns will disappear with the appearance of large trading centers. The first reason is that regional entrepreneurs will move to other regions. Individual companies will go bankrupt, so many businessmen will be driven to open business in another community. Another reason is that many people will be unemployed. Many ordinary workers, such as cashiers and porters, will be jobless due to the dissolution of compact stories. Therefore, as well as the entrepreneurs, most of these job seekers will change their place. Furthermore, social facilities will gradually degrade. The owners of shopping malls will be reluctant to improve the quality of life in the society, as they live in other cities and solely want to make the maximum profit with less expenses on the citizens.
However, some shopping centers state that there is nothing threatening to rural area residents. They justify their opinion with the following arguments. Firstly, they will secure consistent supply of products. Many towns often experience problems with the supplement of products because of their remote location, but, with the help of trading malls, the locals will forget this inconvenience forever. Secondly, they will open a plenty of vacancies in different departments. The organization of supermarkets is so large in size as well as level that they need many workers to maintain in good condition, which allow the unemployed to easily find a workplace. Moreover, they will attract investors. The presence of large markets will attract other business leaders from various regions, who will also develop their branches in the region and employ more citizens.
In conclusion, although some holders of supermarkets claim that there is no danger to the congregations in the countryside from their emergence, I think that these rural areas should grow without these trading centers, because they may shatter the settled bonds.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 807, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun expenses is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...ly want to make the maximum profit with less expenses on the citizens. However, ...
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Line 5, column 514, Rule ID: ADJECTIVE_IN_ATTRIBUTE[1]
Message: A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.
Suggestion: large
... The organization of supermarkets is so large in size as well as level that they need many wo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, i think, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 7.85571142285 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1883.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 353.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3342776204 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7642803434 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558073654391 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 570.6 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 59.5339398999 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.15 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.65 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.85 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169869402895 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0484446563857 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0317072611152 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.090547517535 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.038668404023 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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