If a goal is worthy, then any means taken to attain it are justifiable.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
The topic raises here the controversial issue of attaing a worthy goal by any means is justified.Indisputably,If the goal is cardinal then the necessity of attaining it is inviolable. Nevertheless,attaining the goal by any means idicates that the way can be unfair or illegal or also can be fair. However,attaing the worthy goal is justifiable but achieving that by unfair means can not hold any solid logic.The topic is palatable except the means of achieving that,specifically the it should be specifically mention fair means rather than any means.
First of all,every human in this world is living with a goal & everyone is running everyday behind their golas.But there is a complexity defining the worthiness of a goal.To become more crystalize it can be say that, Each one goal is worhty to themselves.For illustrataion we can look at a example , In a poor country like Bangladesh there are several slums where the poor people just want to collect their daily food & their most cherish goal is that.But for a rich man in the other side of the city who live in tall building, his worthy goal don't confined among just food,thats the necessity to him.In addition,his worthy goal maybe want to achieve the a huge profit in business or some other rich things.The goal's worthiness actually depend on the man,what he wanted.So obviously it can't be genarilzed a worthy goal by neglecting it's behind story.
Furthermore,the goal may be important to the person but he can't do anything for achieving it.To be more specifically,one can not choose unfiar means to attain his goals. For example,if we look at the games, in 2017 australa cricket team is playing a test match against england where they wanted to win the match & that's surely a worthy goal for them.But the australia cricket team captain & vice captain took a unfair means to achive the goals ,they tempered the ball which is illegal in cricket. In this circumstance they could not win the match also got penalty for doing this unfair means.Therefore,Means shoudl be specifically fair.
Admittedly,meaans is good reason to do the work for obtaining the goal with more toughly.It is also true it enable the to raise woreship of human, to achieve his goal.For example.Mathmatecian Gaus rewrite his whole invention formula after that had burnt.Another sciencitist tomas alva edison work diligently to invent the light.Any goal can be achieved by fair means.But it needed more hard work.Consequently,By doing the hard work for obtaining human's own goal can make a human much more solid & perfect.
In the colclusion,Although the worthy goal obtaining is important,doing that without fair work is not appriciable.As long there are some area involved by mentioning the means as unfair means the statment can be justified.In fact,it should specially mention about the fair means.
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...d on the man,what he wanted.So obviously it cant be genarilzed a worthy goal by n...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, consequently, first, furthermore, however, if, look, may, nevertheless, so, then, therefore, for example, in addition, in fact, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 19.5258426966 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 33.0505617978 115% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 58.6224719101 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2374.0 2235.4752809 106% => OK
No of words: 462.0 442.535393258 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13852813853 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.63618218583 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.40733653892 2.79657885939 122% => OK
Unique words: 239.0 215.323595506 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.517316017316 0.4932671777 105% => OK
syllable_count: 719.1 704.065955056 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 4.38483146067 228% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 20.2370786517 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 51.0 23.0359550562 221% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 222.077119293 60.3974514979 368% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 263.777777778 118.986275619 222% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 51.3333333333 23.4991977007 218% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 17.8888888889 5.21951772744 343% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 59.0 7.80617977528 756% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135419998958 0.243740707755 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0730488724423 0.0831039109588 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0240996574107 0.0758088955206 32% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.083296825069 0.150359130593 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0303174589751 0.0667264976115 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 28.4 14.1392134831 201% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 19.71 48.8420337079 40% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.92365168539 164% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 23.2 12.1743820225 191% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.42 12.1639044944 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.79 8.38706741573 117% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 100.480337079 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 11.8971910112 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 22.4 11.2143820225 200% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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