In some countries it is becoming increasingly common for people to follow a vegetarian diet. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
Vegetarianism has gained enormous popularity among people in some places around the world. In my opinion, the benefits of this trend, such as saving more livestock and more water, outweigh the disadvantages.
A vegetarian diet might seem to be a healthy diet for some people to follow, as people have always thought that eating meat has a dire impact on health. While exaggeration in eating meat may cause some health issues such as Gout, omitting meat from people’s daily diet would lead to serious ramifications. As a pharmacist, I have studied that meat contains the essential amino acids which support the normal growth of nerves and tissues; hence, cutting meat can lead to the deterioration of eyesight for example. Another drawback is that this sort of diet could be costlier than any other diet. As for people to eat diverse meals and not get bored, they need to shop from specific markets which are not predominant in all demographics.
On the other hand, I believe that not only becoming a vegetarian helps in saving animal’s lives but it can also help in saving the environment. People who are leading this lifestyle never eat meat or their products; therefore, they are contributing to decreasing the number of animals being killed for the purpose of eating. After the wide prominence of the vegetarianism, numbers of cattle farms have decreased by 28%, and this is according to a study published by the Times in 2017. In addition, vegetarianism has a significant role in the decline of water consumption; one of the most threatened natural resources on Earth. To illustrate, a ten acres cattle farm consumes ten million cubic centimeters per year, while to grow crops in the same area requires half the amount of water.
To conclude, it seems to me that the merits of a vegetarian diet eclipse the demerits as if the number of vegetarians is increased, more water and animals will be saved.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, may, so, therefore, while, as for, for example, in addition, sort of, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1594.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93498452012 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86472246131 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59133126935 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.9405058109 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.615384615 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8461538462 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2307692308 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221404329627 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0774962416563 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0721038506488 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124805796396 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0486152876472 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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