Advertising is commonly found. What are the advantages and disadvantages of advertising?
One tool to promote product is through advertising campaign. While advertising contains some merits, the demerits outweigh the perceived benefits.
It is true that many advantages are offered by the advertisements. In many cases, the advertising is a key part of modern business because companies need to tell customers about their products, and without advertising consumers would have less choice to buy the suitable ones. Advertising is a creative industry that employs many people, and thus there would be higher unemployment, if advertising companies are no longer existed. Eventually, people enjoy adverts. The campaigns always give the one a colourful and interesting commercial video bringing the positive influences to them.
Having said that, the dramatically continuous advertising has some demerits. The massive campaign conducted by advertising agency can manipulate people because the advertisement generally puts high standard of product showed in some social media, although the quality of product itself is not to be good. Also, such people always follow the latest trend given rise to by promoted contents by influencers, and this triggers those people to buy something that they do not really need. Finally, children put pressure on parents to buy them toys, and this bad habit consistently makes them become very consumptive.
To sum up, even though some advantages are provided by the commercial advertising, this brings some negative impacts. It is imperative that government should impose tough regulations about campaign conducted by the companies.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, if, really, so, thus, while, in many cases, it is true, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1344.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 238.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.64705882353 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97840780806 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.655462184874 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.2824659759 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.384615385 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3076923077 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.15384615385 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225733325524 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0797354783079 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0714420711294 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137506358609 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0677454730956 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.49 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.64 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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