In some contries, young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting universities studies
Nowdays, it is believed that in many countries youth has desire get a job or have journey in one year after graduated from high school and before became collage student. In this essay, I completely agree that more advantages than disadvantages. For some reason such as they can get several experiences and be obtained possible to pay study tuition in the university
In the one hand, the advantage of that is to support young people become independence human. It because they could meet have a lot of amaze people with story differently and have saving money before begining universities studies. For example in Wonogiri, Central Java most of young people are able to purchase secundery necessary and visited many places because decide to work and one year ago prepared continue their study. There is important to transformed youth and lighten parents burden.
On other hand, the disadvantage of youth prefer to seek a job or around to travel for a year before discontinous their study is wasting time and loaded risk to fail. It is due to Indonesian society culture if delay to recieve Bachelor title is delaid be successfull. For instance several youths decide breaks for not seriously be entrepreneur. Therefore thet were bankrupt and overdue get Bachelor title. Its no doubt that only they parents anxiety. I don't believed that some countries youth can not succesfull get benefit than damage. In my opinion a failures while a year in working and doing journey are common
In conclusion, from where I stand I trusted that more positive impacts than negative for young generations who break to get occupation in one year period
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 38, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'countries'' or 'country's'?
Suggestion: countries'; country's
Nowdays, it is believed that in many countries youth has desire get a job or have jour...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...eaks for not seriously be entrepreneur. Therefore thet were bankrupt and overdue get Bach...
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Line 5, column 406, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
...ankrupt and overdue get Bachelor title. Its no doubt that only they parents anxiety...
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Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'parent'
Suggestion: parent
...elor title. Its no doubt that only they parents anxiety. I dont believed that some coun...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...doubt that only they parents anxiety. I dont believed that some countries youth can ...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'countries'' or 'country's'?
Suggestion: countries'; country's
...ents anxiety. I dont believed that some countries youth can not succesfull get benefit th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1366.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00366300366 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67846983308 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.611721611722 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.9895009244 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.076923077 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.69230769231 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237652674731 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0654867651388 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0620678785142 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134320895189 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0255428255954 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.