You are studying a short course in another country. Your accommodation was arranged by the course provider. There is a major problem with the accommodation.
Write a letter to the course provider. In your letter,
say what the problem is
describe the accommodation you thought you were getting
ask the provider to solve the problem
Dear Sir,
I am writing this epistle to bring your attention to the hostel accommodation facilities. We are suffering with a major issues related to hygiene in toilets. The cleanliness is worst in all the rooms in our hostel block.
I came from India and our country is known is struggling with such issues as compare with developed countries like this one. Although, by looking the amenities I could not find it better anyhow. I thought the hygiene will be the top priority from your support and cleaning of washrooms will be on the daily basis. But, unfortunately it is not correct and no one is caring about to complaint since I joined this hostel block.
I would request you to find the solution as early as possible or else change the accommodation of all students to any other block where hygienic conditions are good.
I hope you will understand our situation and take the action on immediate basis.
Thank you in anticipation.
Yours sincerely,
Vishal Bhat
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am writing this epistle to bring your ...
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Line 5, column 126, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...with developed countries like this one. Although, by looking the amenities I could not f...
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Line 7, column 167, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ock where hygienic conditions are good. I hope you will understand our situation...
^^^^^^
Line 12, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... you in anticipation. Yours sincerely, Vishal Bhat
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 818.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 167.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89820359281 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74235807411 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.646706586826 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 248.4 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.9615517696 44.8134815571 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.3636363636 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1818181818 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.18181818182 4.34317383033 27% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0953466993505 0.216113520407 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0371485080431 0.0766984524023 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0282251844462 0.0603063233224 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0474529860664 0.12726935374 37% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0192251380692 0.0580467560999 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 8.37731958763 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 8.71597938144 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.