Parents should not pressure their children to choose particular profession. Young people should have the freedom to choose path they like.
To what extend do you agree or disagree?
It is widely accepted that children should not be imposed by their parents on determining a particular career. While some people believe that young people should be encouraged to decide the path they desire freely, others oppose this idea. I the final analysis, I strongly agree with the former view due to the reasons that will be justified in this essay.
The first reason for this is because every child has different abilities. In other words, applying children to a prestigious profession is likely to limit their talents and creativity in other jobs. For instance, a child who is prone to imagination and art can hardly success in jobs related to calculation like accountants, business, etc. Ultimately, parents' expectations become a great pressure on their children. In addition to the above, I also believe that passion is the main motivation to foster children's profession. That is to say, parents need to respect children's interests and passions. One clear example is that a favorite job makes children feel happier than those who follow their parents' footsteps. The desire will help them to devote their life to their career path.
The argument in favor of the parental orientation could be that parents have much experience of life and love their children very much. To put it simply, parents expect their children to live well and happy, and build a bright future for them. However, in my opinion, it is unwise to accept parents' arrangement. Although parental guidance plays a vital part of children's particular profession, it depends on children's decision. Instead forcing children, parents should strive to create an environment that encourages children's talents and passions.
In conclusion, despite some arguments, I strongly believe that parents should avoid pressuring their children to follow specific career paths. Moreover, young people need the freedom and parental support in the future career.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 429, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Instead,
...sion, it depends on childrens decision. Instead forcing children, parents should strive...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, moreover, so, well, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion, in other words, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1627.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2996742671 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6988734931 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57328990228 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.004937784 49.4020404114 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 90.3888888889 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0555555556 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.77777777778 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 8.67935871743 196% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.324005484761 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103372008841 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.059215929511 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207092561687 0.151304729494 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0208619799746 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.16 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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