As we acquire more knowledge, things do not become more comprehensible, but more complex and mysterious.
Human has the tendency to dive deeper gaining knowledge as to get a better understanding of the subject. It is the nature of the human kind which keeps looking for the answers that disturb them. Consequently, various discoveries and inventions are made in this path of lifelong research. While some people agree to the author's view about things being incomprehensible when we dig deeper into its root cause, I beg to differ and states most conspicuous reasons to rear my standpoint.
Since 1995 the nutritionists warned us about the higher fat intake that can cause fatal heart problems and severe other long-term diseases. According to them, the recommended fat intake should be between 40-50 grams. As the fat content is more in the fast food with the dangerous added trans fat, therefore, the food companies started to baked their products like potato chips, fries, burger buns, etc instead of frying them as before. However, nutritionist digs deeper into this pool of food science and found that sugar is more detrimental to our health than fat in accordance with the research in 2008. Sugar is associated with more health problems and the existence of ketogenic diet, healthy cold pressed oil to provide extra evidence that fat is not our enemy if taken in moderation as compared to sugar which is a sweet but bitter truth. Therefore, gaining more knowledge in the food sector helped us to understand more about our daily intake and also help to prevent us from deadly maladies.
In the era of the 14th century, it was believed that the earth is flat and whosoever go to the corner of the earth will eventually fall into the sun. This misconception adheres for centuries until the experimentalist and philosophers proved the mere fact that earth is round rather flat. The perfect example to illustrate is of the famous sailor and philosopher Christopher Columbus, who despite the warning from the people of his era, went around the earth and discovered the land of America. Moreover, today we are sending rovers to other planets in our solar system that helped us to understand more about the planet other than earth. Hence, this advancement was possible with the zeal to gain more knowledge about the particular thing which ultimately broadens our perspective by giving us a clear vision of the subject.
However, it is true that some of our ideas become complicated as we gain more information about our research. On the other hand, it can also be said that after enduring the pain of going through them we have discovered some mind-blowing inventions. For instance, the Artificial intelligence and machine learning is a broad concept upon which the AI assistants like Siri, Cortana and OK google are based. They were invented to simplify the redundant task to save time so that probabilistic task is where the human mind can concentrate. But the research and development of these introduced us to the problem were these AI assistant are talking with themselves in their own language. On further investigation introduced us the concept of Neutral network upon which Google duplex, much better AI assistant then its predecessors, is invented. Therefore, acquiring knowledge makes the concept more comprehensible rather what is stated by the author on the topic.
In conclusion, the aforementioned facts give the clear vision that it is int the nature of mankind to hunger for more knowledge which eventually benefits the present and the future generations
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 612, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this AI' or 'these ais'?
Suggestion: this AI; these ais
...these introduced us to the problem were these AI assistant are talking with themselves i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, hence, however, if, look, moreover, so, then, therefore, while, as to, for instance, in conclusion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 19.5258426966 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.3162921348 177% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 33.0505617978 160% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 82.0 58.6224719101 140% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2901.0 2235.4752809 130% => OK
No of words: 575.0 442.535393258 130% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0452173913 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.89685180668 4.55969084622 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78813906947 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 310.0 215.323595506 144% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539130434783 0.4932671777 109% => OK
syllable_count: 893.7 704.065955056 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.2306436226 60.3974514979 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.130434783 118.986275619 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 23.4991977007 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.69565217391 5.21951772744 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184398899927 0.243740707755 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0510409597887 0.0831039109588 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0630332925699 0.0758088955206 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0962693708935 0.150359130593 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0355049711412 0.0667264976115 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 14.1392134831 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 48.8420337079 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 12.1743820225 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.1639044944 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.38706741573 107% => OK
difficult_words: 148.0 100.480337079 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 79.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.75 Out of 6
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