You go to a gym to carry out exercise every day. One day, you have forgotten your bag and the gym management has announced that they would keep the gym closed for a week for some renovation work. You need your bag as it has some important things in it.
Write a letter to the manager of the gym. In your letter
- introduce yourself and describe your problem
- give a description of your bag
- tell them what you want them to do
Hello Mr Arun,
I am Aparajita and my membership Identification number is A12345Z. my scheduled timing in the gymnasium is from 6 to 7pm everyday. I am writing this letter to seek your support in fetching my bag which I had forgotten yesterday evening when I visited for regular fitness hour.
A red color cylindrical shape bag with blue pockets at both sides is kept in my locker . The bag not only contains the usual towel and dress but also a crucial official document that I need to submit in office by tomorrow. Therefore, its mandatory for me to get it back.
Last day around 7pm I had finished treadmill and took shower. Since it started raining all of a sudden so, I returned home with one of my neighbor and forgot the bag at locker section, in urgency. today while searching the document I realized the bag is still in the gymnasium locker hence, your assistance is required to get it as I got a message from the fitness center administration stating closure of the gym from today due to renovation work.
will it be possible for you to let me into gym and take my bag out? my sincere request to you is to have a word with the management and abreast them about the issue. I hope they will understand the situation and allow for once. Being a valuable customer, I expect to have the manuscripts by tomorrow or else it will be a crisis.
Yours Sincerely
Aparajita
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 68, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: My
...rship Identification number is A12345Z. my scheduled timing in the gymnasium is fr...
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Line 5, column 122, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...iming in the gymnasium is from 6 to 7pm everyday. I am writing this letter to seek your ...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... I visited for regular fitness hour. A red color cylindrical shape bag with b...
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Line 9, column 87, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ckets at both sides is kept in my locker . The bag not only contains the usual tow...
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Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...its mandatory for me to get it back. Last day around 7pm I had finished tread...
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Line 13, column 198, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Today
... the bag at locker section, in urgency. today while searching the document I realized...
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Line 15, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...m from today due to renovation work. will it be possible for you to let me i...
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Line 17, column 2, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Will
... today due to renovation work. will it be possible for you to let me into g...
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Line 17, column 70, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: My
...to let me into gym and take my bag out? my sincere request to you is to have a wor...
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Line 19, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...omorrow or else it will be a crisis. Yours Sincerely Aparajita
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, still, therefore, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1157.0 937.175257732 123% => OK
No of words: 251.0 206.0 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.60956175299 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6603850571 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 127.690721649 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613545816733 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 362.7 290.88556701 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.1455427152 44.8134815571 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.6428571429 76.5299724578 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9285714286 16.8248392259 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 4.34317383033 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 2.54639175258 393% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246761313208 0.216113520407 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0736612326635 0.0766984524023 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0615876372751 0.0603063233224 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126461904935 0.12726935374 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0484468560527 0.0580467560999 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 8.37731958763 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.16 8.71597938144 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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