You have recently changed your job and started working for a new company.
Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter:
explain why you changed your previous job
describe your new job
tell him/her your other news
Dear Sally,
Hope this finds you and your family well. It has been ages since we last wrote each other. I’m writhing to let you know about my new job.
I changed my job because my previous office was located outside the city and it took almost two hours to reach. To be honest, I was completely burned out because I’ve to work long hours to complete office work and the salary was not great accordingly.
Basically, I applied for new job in a multinational job that was looking for admin staff for its city centre branch. Luckily, I was selected for this job. I’m quite happy since the working conditions and the pay is better now, and I don’t need to drive to work anymore.
Well, I’m excited to share other news that I recently bought a new house. Why don’t you pop around and have a look at it? Perhaps, we could have lunch together at my new house. Let me know when to expect you.
Wait to see you soon.
Love,
Sara
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 5, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...u. Wait to see you soon. Love, Sara
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, look, so, well, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 795.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 175.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.54285714286 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29009580051 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.645714285714 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 239.4 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.8343508822 44.8134815571 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 61.1538461538 76.5299724578 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.4615384615 16.8248392259 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.84615384615 4.34317383033 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232341741689 0.216113520407 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0728904494497 0.0766984524023 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0463280179563 0.0603063233224 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118866820309 0.12726935374 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0560978535231 0.0580467560999 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.7 8.37731958763 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.46 8.71597938144 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.9 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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