Claim: Governments must ensure that their major cities receive the financial support they need in order to thrive.
Reason: It is primarily in cities that a nation's cultural traditions are preserved and generated.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason on which that claim is based.
This is a very sensitive issue and it is difficult for us to decide the roles or duties of the government.There are many issues in this statement that need to be addressed.The first question is that whether the nation’s culture is preserved in cities or small towns or villages. Also,the cities should be given financial support only to preserve the nation’s culture?Preservation of nation’s culture should not be the only reason for developing the cities.
Major cities are a driving force for the nation’s development.Also,the major cities can make the cultural traditions of the nation famous in the world.However,it is the small towns and villages that preserve most of the cultural traditions of the nation.The traditions in small towns and villages is much purer than its counterpart cities.Therefore,for preserving the nation’s traditions, the government has to provide essential financial support to the small towns rather than focusing more on major cities.
Considering the example of HongKong,it used to be known as a small village before it was colonized by the Britishers. After the British left the nation, it was drastically changed in comparison to it was before colonization. The traditions were almost completely influenced due to the reign of British. So, investing in such nations for preserving the traditions is just money down the drain.However,due to it being a financial hub it attracts lots of people around the world.So, Chinese government has to preserve its importance.
However, while major cities are the resource of one country's culture, the major part of population in many countries lives in villages. In cities, most people are doing salary-based jobs and in villages, most of the people are farmers. The government of a country has to take care of both the sides to keep balance in society. To construct major cities, the rural places should not be ignored.
The cultural traditions are a chief support to the nation.However,the government should take care of the development of both the rural as well as the urban areas.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, so, therefore, well, while, as to, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.3162921348 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 33.0505617978 48% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 58.6224719101 82% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1764.0 2235.4752809 79% => OK
No of words: 331.0 442.535393258 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32930513595 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.46709612801 2.79657885939 124% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 215.323595506 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.477341389728 0.4932671777 97% => OK
syllable_count: 548.1 704.065955056 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 11.0 4.99550561798 220% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.2370786517 59% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 23.0359550562 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 121.260824259 60.3974514979 201% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 147.0 118.986275619 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5833333333 23.4991977007 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.91666666667 5.21951772744 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 7.80617977528 243% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248086763472 0.243740707755 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0827984041477 0.0831039109588 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0723818266769 0.0758088955206 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142531473637 0.150359130593 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0583045539302 0.0667264976115 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 14.1392134831 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 48.8420337079 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 12.1743820225 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 12.1639044944 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.38706741573 106% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 100.480337079 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 11.8971910112 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.2143820225 114% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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