Many parents encourage young people to leave home when they become older, while others think they should stay at home with the family. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, teenagers encouraged by their parents to leave family as soon as they get old enough to live independently, while others think that it will be better for the youth to stay in the family as long as they need. I think that leaving parent's house at an early age will be beneficial for both children and parents.
On the one hand, entering adulthood may be very harsh experience, but such experience may bring new possibilities for young people such as getting a new job to be self-sufficient and training their decision-making skills. Only by experiencing this will young people feel more confident and independent, hence they will be able to cope with their adult problems more easily than those who rely on their parents. Moreover, leaving a family at a young age, will give a chance for the parents to enjoy their lives and spend more quality time with each other or with friends. So, I think that leaving a family would be beneficial for children and for parents.
On the other hand, it is impossible for some children to go to work and live independently, due to some reasons such as, treats of the character or further education, therefore it is crucial for them to stay at parent's house as long as they need. Being a student is not an easy task to do. So, if an individual studies all day long and has neither time nor strength to work after lessons, it will be some support from the parents, to let their children stay at home. In addition, all people are different, and some young ones may have very fragile mental health; so by encouraging such people to live by themselves may bring very serious problems such as panic attacks and aggression.
In conclusion, even though leaving parent's house at an early age have some strong benefits for young people and their parents, in some cases such a brave move may be very inappropriate, because some children need help while studying, or it may cause harm to a child's mental health. But I think that, in general, the practice of leaving a house at an early age is advantageous, because it will forge young people into self-sufficient and independent adults.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, while, i think, in addition, in conclusion, in general, such as, in some cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1757.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 373.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71045576408 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39467950092 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71135855006 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.479892761394 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 538.2 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.1594288904 49.4020404114 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.416666667 106.682146367 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.0833333333 20.7667163134 150% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.9166666667 7.06120827912 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214284314094 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0928012591427 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0561104446623 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154102819404 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0463196457773 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.93 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.63 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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