Nowadays in many countries people are following the latest fashion, hairstyle and so on. Why are they so influenced by fashion? Is it a positive or negative development?
Fashion has become an inevitable part of today's youngsters whereby youngsters try to move this trendy world. However, some people have their own fashion styles while many have huge influence which makes them to be fashionable. This erratic situation has both positive and negative developments, which I am going to discuss.
To begin with, fashion has, partly, made people confident and allows them to stand out among others, but when it comes to influence then there are manifold reasons of it. Firstly, many people have misinterpreted about fashion and they confine fashion until clothes and hairstyles, which is the result of influence which has been created by many celebrities and renowned people. As a result, especially youngsters, they imitate those celebrities by donning same clothes and hairstyle, which in turn ultimately prove negative for them. On the top of that, mindset of people has tremendously altered with respect to time, and they have huge influence of the outer world, as many people concede that fashion makes them more superior as well as knowledgeable, consequently cornered them from realistic things, which are way more important to accomplish success.
However, with some negative sides, one can also never forget to shed light over the positive things about fashion. Fashion has also become source of earning for many people, and people manage their livelihood easily by opting a career in fashion designing, which is again a more beneficial factor for young people. In addition, fashion glows someone's personality in a more effective way, and allow people to get success conveniently. For instance, it has been found in many surveys that people gravitate towards those people who are more fashionable.
In conclusion, I reckon that fashion is necessary to be a part of this world, but one should use it in a good way for bringing better lifestyle.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, however, if, so, then, well, while, for instance, i reckon, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, to begin with, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 5.94088669951 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 25.0 20.9802955665 119% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 31.9359605911 128% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1583.0 1207.87684729 131% => OK
No of words: 304.0 242.827586207 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20723684211 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7033930633 2.71678728327 100% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 139.433497537 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565789473684 0.580463131201 97% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 379.143842365 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.931034482759 537% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5024630542 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.3178502233 50.4703680194 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.916666667 104.977214359 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3333333333 20.9669160288 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.3333333333 7.25397266985 211% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264439901692 0.242375264174 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106337454055 0.0925447433944 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0466313644258 0.071462118173 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156934585345 0.151781067708 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0625425096347 0.0609392437508 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 12.6369458128 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 53.1260098522 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.9458128079 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 11.5310837438 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.32886699507 107% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 55.0591133005 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.3980295567 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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