Children over the age of 15 should be allowed to vote.
While some people might believe that children over the age of 15 are not mature enough to be given voting rights, most of the people believe that children over the age of 15 should be allowed to vote. I believe that children over the age of 15 are mature enough to vote and should be granted their rights.
One of the chief reasons for my fundamental agreement with the author is that if the nation includes more part of the population for voting, it is essentially considering more number of views and opinions to decide on the ruling party. For instance, children over the age of 15 might have a different and unexplored view about the party and might be critical in the election process. Similar to any other decision, more the data points, better the result.
Another reason for my view is that children over the age of 15 are well aware of the factors that are crucial for selecting a particular party. Being the next generation, they know exactly what the future needs for prosperity. For instance, they might have some ideas for improving the current situation of the nation. If the party's view is complacent with that, it is better for the nation's progress.
Some might argue that children cannot take such important decisions and are jejune. Yet we know that children are the least likely to be biased about any party or to accept bribe from any party. Their decisions will always be unbiased and equitable. Whereas, the decisions of adults might be influenced by money or bribery.
For all the reasons stated above, I agree with the author that children over the age of 15 should be allowed to vote.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, well, whereas, while, as for, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 43.0788530466 49% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1337.0 1977.66487455 68% => OK
No of words: 285.0 407.700716846 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69122807018 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36053006447 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 212.727598566 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.477192982456 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 421.2 618.680645161 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.94265232975 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.8274573925 48.9658058833 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.5 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3571428571 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.57142857143 5.45110844103 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.488322946671 0.236089414692 207% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.184038506388 0.076458572812 241% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.224896071695 0.0737576698707 305% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.32691892401 0.150856017488 217% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.245711357361 0.0645574589148 381% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 11.7677419355 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 86.8835125448 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 10.002688172 180% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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