Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
It is widely accepted that the development of a nation significantly relies on its transportation system. While some people are in favor of the idea that investing money into the railway system should be prioritized by the authorities, others oppose it. In the final analysis, I strongly agree with the former view due to the reasons that will be justified in the essay.
The first reason for this is because moving from one place to another is likely to be faster. That is to say, a train system will deal with the congestion that occurs frequently on roads. For instance, with a high speed, train passengers easily get around the country via available routes. In addition to the above, I also believe that using the railway network is considered to safer than road vehicles. To put it simply, the carriage of a huge passengers and several hundred tonnes of goods by train may limit dangerous risks. One clear example is that the number of road accidents in many countries are much higher than that of the railway casualties.
The argument in favor of roads investment would be that road transport has flexibility in time. With road vehicles, drivers will not depend on the specified time. However, I believe that it is an imprudent investment. Railway network will definitely bring higher profits and productivity if governments invest.
In conclusion, despite some arguments, I strongly believe that governments should focus on building more railway station and limit road transportations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, may, so, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1253.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 247.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07287449393 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82537725666 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.587044534413 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 386.1 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.1744539736 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 89.5 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6428571429 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155607662518 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.048812950474 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0361921910516 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0902184463727 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0197608264867 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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