Are famous people treated unfairly by the media? Should they be given more privacy, or is the price of their fame an invasion into their private life?
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Everything comes with a price, for celebrity’s media peeking into their personal life is considered a levy they pay for being famous. Every person in this world has the right to have a personal space and will not prefer anyone intervening it.
From a couple of years, media has grown enormously and is still growing. New channels are launched more often than ever. Due to this expansion every channel is trying to break news despite being big or small however all this is putting an impact on celebrities, their private life is targeted. Paparazzi have been putting enormous pressure on all categories of famous people they can be, film stars, Rich people, Tv Anchors, etc. Their main aim to pull some personal information out of these VIP’s, spice it up and present it to the world. All this is done to make a living out of this.
Everyone wants to live a fancy famous life but when it comes to solitude it gets hard to get away with all these media people. We need to understand these masters of their fields are an asset to our nations and they should get their rights. Today these artists are paying for being famous every moment they are having second thoughts if some are noticing them, recording their acts, etc.
In my opinion, there should a line drawn between private and professional life. If we put ourselves in other shoes maybe than we can understand how they feel. Having my time is the right for everyone and it must be respected.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 233, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'anyone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'intervenes'.
Suggestion: intervenes
...rsonal space and will not prefer anyone intervening it. From a couple of years, media has ...
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Line 4, column 81, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... between private and professional life. If we put ourselves in other shoes maybe t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, second, so, still, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1204.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66666666667 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42064116209 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.616279069767 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 372.6 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.368545105 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.0 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4285714286 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.92857142857 7.06120827912 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276813028951 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0874556215913 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0694992347852 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162347040875 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0485771125402 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 50.2224549098 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.3001002004 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.