Currently there is a trend towards the use of alternative forms of medicine. However, at best these methods are ineffective and at worst the may be dangerous
Nowadays is believed that there a preference concerning the application alternative types of medicine. I completely agree there was bigger disadvantages than advantages for patient such as greater risk of death to them who choose alternative forms of medicine
In the one hand the advantage of modern medical treatment is to cure patient healthy in minimal time with maximal result. It is because since used in modern medical treatment had been verified and applicated by doctors. For example in Singapore many of doctor had method and new modern equipment healed cancer patient based on new research medicine. As result most patient from various countries come to Singapore for reacquired healthy rapidly with modern medical tools and drugs. It is important concluded modern medical treatment conduct in among society for bestow alive prospect longer to patient
In the other hand, the biggest disadvantages from alternative types of medicine which impacted patient was increased greater risk of death. It is due to alternative medicine given treatment and medicine without health medical theory so able made things worse. For instance mostly alternative forms of medicine for cancer disease suggested poor diet without sufficient nutrients. Therefore it made patient condition impaired. It is no doubt that this matter succeed the largest cause risk of death
I do not believed that chosing alternative types of medicine had more positive impact to heal from illness. In my opinion exactly there was dangerous risk when the patient left modern medical treatment and adopted alternative medicine to solve health problem. In conclusion, from where I stand I trusted that modern medical treatment better than alternative medicine cause not had back drop for patient
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 380, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...poor diet without sufficient nutrients. Therefore it made patient condition impaired. It ...
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Line 7, column 382, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: backdrop
...than alternative medicine cause not had back drop for patient
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1499.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45090909091 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69166082866 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545454545455 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.2773396221 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.916666667 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9166666667 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.75 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0744894928052 0.244688304435 30% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0359606245726 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0241923576223 0.0667982634062 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0571855151422 0.151304729494 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0224744653151 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.63 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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