Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the above statment
Nowadays is believed that raising the price of petrol is the best method to analyze increasing traffic and pollution matter. I completely agree that more disadvantages than advantages. Although there was benefit from increasing cost of petrol but the greatest disadvantages impact which petrol rose was will be an increase of daily basic necessities.
In the one hand the advantages is succeed solution decreased traffic and reduced trouble of pollution. It because several people who used transportation with petrol fuel will consider to utilize car or motorcycle and prefer taken public transportation. For example in Singapore the cost to purchase petrol was very high so many citizens more chosen public transportation such as rail to go from one spot to another. As result, there was no increase in traffic and pollution matter due to transportation not occur. It is important that when petrol prices was precious be able assisted the state to solve problems of rising traffic and pollution
On other hand the disadvantages when petrol prices was climbed was able impacted high prices for basic commodities. it is due to basic commodities transported by transportation that required petrol so influenced sale price the basic commodities. For instance the basic commodities which transported from city to village by truck with hight cost petrol flue impacted price of basic commodities became expensive. Therefore when daily basic necessities increased for a long time automatically monetary crisis will happened. It is no doubt that detrimental to society and the state. I do not believed that high cost of petrol fuel has more advantages. In my opinion there was the biggest impact from increasing petrol selling price.
In conclusion, from where I stand, I agree with that statment if rose petrol price had many drop back thar benefit was able impacted for now and a long period of time
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 333, Rule ID: BASIC_FUNDAMENTALS[1]
Message: Use simply 'necessities'.
Suggestion: necessities
...l rose was will be an increase of daily basic necessities. In the one hand the advantages is ...
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Line 3, column 35, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'succeeded'.
Suggestion: succeeded
.... In the one hand the advantages is succeed solution decreased traffic and reduced ...
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Line 3, column 176, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[3]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'consider utilizing'.
Suggestion: consider utilizing
...ed transportation with petrol fuel will consider to utilize car or motorcycle and prefer taken publ...
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Line 5, column 117, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...cted high prices for basic commodities. it is due to basic commodities transported...
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Line 5, column 412, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
... of basic commodities became expensive. Therefore when daily basic necessities increased ...
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Line 5, column 433, Rule ID: BASIC_FUNDAMENTALS[1]
Message: Use simply 'necessities'.
Suggestion: necessities
... became expensive. Therefore when daily basic necessities increased for a long time automatically...
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Line 5, column 512, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'happen'
Suggestion: happen
...time automatically monetary crisis will happened. It is no doubt that detrimental to soc...
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Line 6, column 153, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...it was able impacted for now and a long period of time
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1598.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2393442623 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94807522648 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.504918032787 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 507.6 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.1430841581 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.533333333 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3333333333 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.53333333333 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230558282827 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0878247585411 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0617053592815 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160194142394 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0327194168872 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.