Stress is now a major problem in many countries around the world .what are some of the factors in modern society that cause this stress and how can we reduce?
It is no doubt today is very common thing in human being life through there are many plethora problem in any nations around the world.There are manifold reasons behind for this.This essay would throw some light an all aspects to see things in the right perspective.
The seeds to the issue and multiheheadThere most predominant some dweller believe that in few days adolescent have doing lots of work in whole life.Hence,they have hectic schedule in their work place. After that,nowadays it is very tough competition one to other youngster.For instance,study,sports,
industry line and so on.
Nevertheless,there are no denying that fact the,some older consider that a couple of week children could not like interact of society.
Otherwise,Kids always like alone himself as well as they can not like communication to everybody.Moreover, they always time available on website.For example,
Facebook,Whatsapp,
Snapchat,Twitter and YouTube extra.Last but not the least,youth should not discuss problem for their family.In fact,they facing many problem that why teenager always tense in our life as far as there are causing plenty disease but also anxiety,cardanic,blood pressure and depression so on.
All said and done,I reckon on one hand it is true that everyone have busy lifestyle than they could not involve any activities.On other hand,pupils can not discuss problem with parents.In my point of view,juvenile must need talk with ihsue for their parents .Thus,they might decline their stress.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, thus, well, for example, for instance, i reckon, in fact, no doubt, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1282.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 230.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.57391304348 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.6196272354 2.80592935109 129% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.673913043478 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 387.9 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 38.0 20.2975951904 187% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 116.491773672 49.4020404114 236% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 213.666666667 106.682146367 200% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 38.3333333333 20.7667163134 185% => OK
Discourse Markers: 23.3333333333 7.06120827912 330% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 32.0 5.01903807615 638% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112287115041 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0447788308319 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0423289116208 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0421850341529 0.151304729494 28% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0411537426313 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.0 13.0946893788 183% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 24.45 50.2224549098 49% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.3 11.3001002004 171% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.62 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.92 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.2 10.1190380762 170% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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