It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction.
To what extent do you agree with this Opinion?
What sort of punishment are parents and teachers allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children
It is imperative that children differentiate between correct and incorrect choices at younger age, but because of trauma, I completely disagree that punishing them is a necessary method to be adopted. However, if this is inevitable, it must be limited to a mild one.
Curiously though, of what benefit will it be for both the children and the society if the youngsters learn acceptable moral behaviours but are physically or psychologically traumatized ? Of course, none. Childhood trauma, which is caused by physical injury or mental abuse through punishment, is negatively affecting about 13% of the young generations in the US, according to the University of Winchester. This indicates that the consequence of inflicting pain on young ones tend to be gravely and also, might be long-term. Enthusiastically, the tertiary institution furthered their research and discovered that about 67% of children often effectively acquire and retain some knowledge if they are treated warmly. So, it is clear that children can learn without going through pain.
But, as mentioned earlier, inevitably, there might be an exception. In this situation, only a gentle discipline should be permitted on the young adults. This notion is evidenced by the 2005 pool result of the Union of Family Affairs, Nevada, which showed that the majority of children usually succumb to the right choices when they realise that if they opt for the unacceptable decision, they will write a particular phrase, perhaps, a hundred times on a paper. Having known this, they became more cautious of their actions, for they did not want to be disciplined 'softly'.
Inasmuch as punishment is a contributing factor to a childhood trauma, and children can learn better in an amiable condition, inflicting pain on them is not necessary, although tenderly disciplining them might be accepted.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to better', 'to well'
Suggestion: to better; to well
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, thus, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1566.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32653061224 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04760656486 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608843537415 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 79.830589857 49.4020404114 162% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.461538462 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6153846154 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.30769230769 7.06120827912 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187195458902 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0614181060621 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0507062550349 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12058171877 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0318895635989 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.04 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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