Governments around the world are spending billions in support of space programs. This money would be better spent on research into improvements in human health. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Nowadays, developed and developing countries are spending huge sums on space projects while many epidemic and pandemic are still remaining incurable around the globe. Huge number of people is dying of diseases while cure is still not found. I believe any scientific research ignoring the health of people is unjustifiable and discuss it further.
To begin with, in this era of advanced technology and luxurious life style, many deadly diseases are wreaking havoc with human’s fragile fight for survival. Some to them are aids, cancers and genetic disorders. It requires a huge sum of money to find treatment of such deadly diseases. Moreover, industrialization is the major reason of rising pollution which eventually results in several disorders like cardio-vascular, diabetes. So, money should be spent to make life comfortable and free from diseases. In addition, lunching space shuttle requires huge money and also cause pollution, thus it is not beneficial.
However, space research is done with the view of making future safe. To illustrate, human research for making colonies on other planets to cope up with the problem growing population which is the major problem that earth is facing. As well as, important metals and resources required to save life on earth are getting scarce on earth, so it seems must to find them out on the nearby planets to meet up their demand on earth. Furthermore, it is also believed that human may come up with the panacea for all diseases through their space research efforts.
To sum up, no doubt, space research should be funded but not ignoring the health. Human life is more important than heavenly bodies.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 348, Rule ID: MUST_HAVE_TO[1]
Message: After 'must', the verb is used without 'to'. Probably, you should use 'must' or 'have to' here.
Suggestion: must; have to
...re getting scarce on earth, so it seems must to find them out on the nearby planets to ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, still, thus, well, while, in addition, no doubt, as well as, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1397.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17407407407 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72774949069 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603703703704 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.8139859121 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.1333333333 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.4 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176175112519 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0565907216875 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0424179770963 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102947856024 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0208807684009 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.41 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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