Some people believe in the era of e-technology, printing newspaper and magazines will cease to occur in the near future. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some people hold the opinion that in the time of e-technology, printing newspaper and magazines will be finished in future. My inclination support the statement that rising technology in the world people are moving swiftly into digital sectors wherein printing news paper and magazines will be hit as well.
In today's fast paced world, it is commonly seen that people are moving towards the technology for saving time and money that eventually is far beneficial specially for those people who are totally engaged with internet and some electronic devices but, on the other hand, it has number of disadvantages as well which effects on different paper industries for instance, newspaper and magazine industry, books and copy industry and many others that actually is decreasing with the passage of time owing to diversification of people towards the technology. Furthermore, survey adepts that vast majority of people prefer to read newspapers through internet instead of reading by paper.
Moreover, mostly youngster has less interest to read newspapers and books as compare to past due to involvement in other activities and busy life schedule. Many intellectual people are concerned that due to rapid extension in technology paper work is decreasing day by day that eventually will be worthwhile for green environment to some extent owing to less usage of trees.
To sum up, it is evident that technology is playing more imperative role in this era which helps the people to get wide range of information within a short time. Whereas, newspapers and magazines gives limited information as compare to Google henceforth, people prefer to use Google instead of reading complete news paper.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
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| 2019-07-08 | Muhammad Waleed Khan | 78 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 114, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...ewspaper and magazines will be finished in future. My inclination support the statement t...
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Line 1, column 262, Rule ID: NEWS_PAPER[1]
Message: Did you mean 'newspaper'? This word sequence is usually spelled together.
Suggestion: newspaper
...y into digital sectors wherein printing news paper and magazines will be hit as well. I...
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Line 7, column 312, Rule ID: NEWS_PAPER[1]
Message: Did you mean 'newspaper'? This word sequence is usually spelled together.
Suggestion: newspaper
... use Google instead of reading complete news paper.
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Line 7, column 324, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...instead of reading complete news paper.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, so, well, whereas, while, for instance, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 3.15609756098 380% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 15.0 5.60731707317 268% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1430.0 965.302439024 148% => OK
No of words: 270.0 196.424390244 137% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2962962963 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 3.73543355544 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81126481793 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 106.607317073 142% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559259259259 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 283.868780488 161% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 33.0 22.4926829268 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 132.379898399 43.030603864 308% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 178.75 112.824112599 158% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.75 22.9334400587 147% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.625 5.23603664747 279% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220737592905 0.215688989381 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110339532406 0.103423049105 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0929335158237 0.0843802449381 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141164284752 0.15604864568 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0714921585126 0.0819641961636 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.4 13.2329268293 154% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.52 61.2550243902 48% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.51609756098 200% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 10.3012195122 168% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 11.4140731707 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 8.06136585366 117% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 40.7170731707 174% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 11.4329268293 175% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.9970731707 138% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 11.0658536585 181% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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