Many people devote most of time to job, so they have little time for other aspects of life such as family and leisure activities. How widespread do you think the problem is? What are the problems this could cause?
With the fast-changing development of technology and economy, we are now living in a highly competitive society. Devoting most of time to job has become a heated debate among people, some people claim that this problem is very widespread in graphic design industry. From my point of view, I am in agreement with this opinion. Furthermore, I reckon it may cause parenting problems.
First of all, it is undeniable that devoting most of time to job is widespread in graphic design industry. To be specific, due to the heavy workload and complicated process of graphic design, it often takes a lot of time for designer to create or revise a project, which means designers have to work overtime otherwise they may lose their job. To further support this statement, a latest Oxford research shows that graphic designers in internet companies in Beijing work from 9 am to 9 pm everyday from Monday to Saturday.
Apart from that, it should also be taken into account that devoting most of time to job may cause parenting problems. To illustrate, it is extremely important for children’s mental health to communicate with their parents. But devoting most of time to job means less time to spend on family, thus lack of communication may lead to children’s mental health issue and may cause parenting problems. A report from New York Times shows that parenting problems occur easily to children who have less than 5 hours communication with parent per week.
To put it into a nutshell, a conclusion can be made that devoting most of time to job is widespread in graphic design industry and it may cause parenting problems.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 380, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...job. To further support this statement, a latest Oxford research shows that graph...
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Line 3, column 490, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...anies in Beijing work from 9 am to 9 pm everyday from Monday to Saturday. Apart from ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, may, so, thus, apart from, i reckon, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 20.9802955665 114% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 31.9359605911 153% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1358.0 1207.87684729 112% => OK
No of words: 275.0 242.827586207 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93818181818 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8793571367 2.71678728327 106% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 139.433497537 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534545454545 0.580463131201 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 419.4 379.143842365 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.7534895482 50.4703680194 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.166666667 104.977214359 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9166666667 20.9669160288 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.25397266985 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243808936271 0.242375264174 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100831683195 0.0925447433944 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0767441662433 0.071462118173 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162491545815 0.151781067708 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0186415452559 0.0609392437508 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 12.6369458128 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 53.1260098522 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 11.5310837438 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.32886699507 98% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 55.0591133005 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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