The design of buildings affect either positively or negatively on people’s life and work. Do you agree or disagree? Give your opinion and give some your experience and examples.
With the fast-changing development of technology and economy, the design of building is kept innovating nowadays. Some people claim that the design of buildings affects positively on people’s life. From my point of view, I am in agreement with it. My reasons and examples are given below.
First of all, it is undeniable that the design of building makes a much more safe living environment for people. As we know, some materials we were using in buildings in the past few decades harmed people’s health. For example, the paint used to be smelly and harm both children and adults’ health seriously. Thanks to the innovation in the design of building, the materials we are using now are more health, provide people a higher living standard of life.
Apart from that, it should be taken into account that the design of buildings give a more comfortable working environment for people. Because of the improvement of space of interior design. The design of building gives a more comfortable working environment for people’s office space. For instance, the auto color-changing glass can adjust it’s color according to the sunlight outside to keep providing a reasonable lighting to the workspace.
To put it into a nutshell, a conclusion can be made that the design of buildings affect positively on people’s life not only because the design of building makes a much more safe living environment for people, but also the design of buildings gives a more comfortable working environment for people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 135, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ortable working environment for people. Because of the improvement of space of interior...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, apart from, for example, for instance, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1285.0 1207.87684729 106% => OK
No of words: 247.0 242.827586207 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2024291498 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01289660225 2.71678728327 111% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 139.433497537 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.51012145749 0.580463131201 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 397.8 379.143842365 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 6.0 1.56157635468 384% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.6177655239 50.4703680194 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.8461538462 104.977214359 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.9669160288 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.92307692308 7.25397266985 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262854419291 0.242375264174 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109011001561 0.0925447433944 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.11039267537 0.071462118173 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184176883021 0.151781067708 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0448549021347 0.0609392437508 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 12.6369458128 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.1260098522 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 11.5310837438 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.32886699507 96% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 55.0591133005 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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