These days, more and more people are going to other countries for significant periods of time, either to find a job or to study. There are clearly many benefits to doing this, but people who live abroad can also face some difficulties
Living overseas for an extended period has become commonplace in recent days. While staying in a foreign country can offer a range of opportunities, especially in terms of career progression as well as gaining unforgettable experience, for some, it might be challenging to deal with culture shock and the language barrier.
As for downsides, the most significant issue appears to be the culture shock, which means the foreigners face considerable difficulties in adapting with the new-found culture and customs. Also, this apart them from mixing with local people, thereby, creating a sense of isolation and ultimately homesickness. In many cases, this situation is even worsened by the lack of emotional support from friends and family members in emergency situations, creating an overall unpleasant experience. Another most obvious drawback for people would be the language barrier which hampers their day-to-day communication with the people, and makes it difficult to cope with the new environment.
However, this is not the same for everyone, many enjoy the limitless-possibilities of living abroad, and gain invaluable experience. For instance, they can practice their language skills and can gain qualifications in their respective field of interests which was by no way possible in their home country. This added qualifications improve their job prospects and promotion, and leads to a more satisfying life. What is more, by engaging with the people from various cultural background, they learn to taste a range of foods and customs, alongside forming lasting relationships. All these life-changing experiences broaden their horizons, and make them more rounded as a person
In conclusion, clearly, the benefits of living abroad are profound; although there are some cons, such as language barrier and culture shock, they are outweighed by the advantages of personal growth and exciting cultural experience.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 271, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'dealing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'challenge' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: dealing
...ence, for some, it might be challenging to deal with culture shock and the language bar...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, well, while, as for, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in many cases, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1631.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.58561643836 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19257993113 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609589041096 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 495.9 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.8716545467 49.4020404114 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.272727273 106.682146367 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5454545455 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222373356382 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0823031623959 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0319139262857 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12056741607 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0383782254625 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.2 13.0946893788 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.44 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.01 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.