You are relocating to a new city. write a letter to an agent to arrange a house for you and your family.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to inquire about the arrangement of accommodation. I would like you to find a house with the near proximity of company, where I am going to work in near future. I am planning to book a flight for the 23rd of October.
Let me explain it further, I am working in Pakistan telecommunication Pvt (Ltd), one of the largest telecom company in Pakistan, as Assistant manager cost accounting. My skills in Cost Accounting are exceptional and top of the line. Recently, I came to know that there is incredible demand of it in Canada, where I will be able to enhance my abilities and work in a challenging environment with diversified workforce. In addition, medical is free and most of the amenities of life would be available at shortest distance. Therefore, I applied for Ontario immigration on the human resource scheme and is awarded one after fulfilling basic requirements.
Firstly, I will need a house in suburb area of Toronto, where there won’t be much noise and rent will be reasonable. secondly, as per house amenities, it should be completely furnished, have private garage, laundry area, open kitchen and a study for children. Finally, It is a major plus if it will be near the main highway, which will decrease travel time to any major city.
I am looking forward to your response, if you need any further information feel free to contact me on my mobile.
Yours faithfully,
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to inquire about the arrang...
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Line 4, column 123, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Secondly
...much noise and rent will be reasonable. secondly, as per house amenities, it should be c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly, so, therefore, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 26.3917525773 140% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1179.0 937.175257732 126% => OK
No of words: 244.0 206.0 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83196721311 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01576971456 2.54303337028 119% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 127.690721649 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614754098361 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 381.6 290.88556701 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 43.3068041991 44.8134815571 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.25 76.5299724578 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3333333333 16.8248392259 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.58333333333 4.34317383033 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133911318215 0.216113520407 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0471568406377 0.0766984524023 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0411539640443 0.0603063233224 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0829952999513 0.12726935374 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0511261075894 0.0580467560999 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 8.37731958763 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 70.7449484536 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 8.71597938144 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 7.59969072165 121% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 41.2886597938 172% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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