You are relocating to a new city. write a letter to an agent to arrange a house for you and your family.
Dear Paul,
Hope this letter finds you in pink of your health.
I am writing to bring into your notice that I am planning to relocate to a new city, with my family.
I want you to look for suitable accommodation for me and my family. I will be traveling on this Friday and will reach my destination on Sunday afternoon. you have approximate a week for the same.
Allow me to explain my requirements in a bit more detail so that your endeavors won't get in vein.
Although I usually prefer a windy apartment, a 3HK apartment will work just fine, because we always have somebody visiting so it should have proper rooms for visitors and families as well. it should have a large modern kitchen with all necessities. it should have a private parking slot available for my car.
The surroundings are also very important, make sure that it is situated in a nice neighborhood. Must be at a convenient distance from local schools and supermarkets.
Please do keep me updated with your search. looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours Sincerely,
James Woss
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 68, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ble accommodation for me and my family. I will be traveling on this Friday and wi...
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Line 6, column 154, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: You
...ach my destination on Sunday afternoon. you have approximate a week for the same. ...
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Line 8, column 90, Rule ID: IN_VEIN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'in vain' (=unsuccessfully)?
Suggestion: in vain
... detail so that your endeavors wont get in vein. Although I usually prefer a windy apa...
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Line 9, column 189, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...ooms for visitors and families as well. it should have a large modern kitchen with...
^^
Line 9, column 250, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...e modern kitchen with all necessities. it should have a private parking slot avai...
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Line 13, column 45, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Looking
...se do keep me updated with your search. looking forward to hearing from you soon. Y...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, look, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 889.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 187.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75401069519 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74700838684 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.668449197861 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 271.8 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.3982886523 44.8134815571 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.5 76.5299724578 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.3571428571 16.8248392259 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.42857142857 4.34317383033 33% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.29896907216 163% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259020286696 0.216113520407 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0840784892975 0.0766984524023 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0864268616413 0.0603063233224 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118999221668 0.12726935374 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0910391450931 0.0580467560999 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 8.37731958763 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 70.7449484536 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.68 8.71597938144 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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