Bar chart
The given bar chart represents the information about the average calorie intake of a different nations in the year 2003.<font></font>
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Overall, it is clear from the graph that the highest calorie intake was in the USA where is Indonesia had a lowest calorie intake compared to other Nations.<font></font>
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The country with the highest calorie intake was the United States,which consumed around 3350 calories per person on an average. compared to New Zealand used about 3200 calories per person. It means the USA lead New zealand by 150 calories during a same year.Interestingly, India and China Nations consumed almost same number of calorie Intakes per year, which was about 2000 average calorie.<font></font>
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Furthermore, the Nations Spain and Mexico utilised the similar number of calories intake, which was about 2500 calories per day. However, the lower side of the spectrum were countries like Somalia at 1800 daily calories. As compared to country Indonesia, consumed around 1700 calories per day. It means, somalia took lead from Indonesia by 100 calories daily.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'nation'?
Suggestion: nation
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Line 3, column 107, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...e was in the USA where is Indonesia had a lowest calorie intake compared to other...
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Line 5, column 67, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , which
...est calorie intake was the United States,which consumed around 3350 calories per perso...
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Line 5, column 130, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Compared
...3350 calories per person on an average. compared to New Zealand used about 3200 calories...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Interestingly
...land by 150 calories during a same year.Interestingly, India and China Nations consumed almos...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 952.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 171.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.56725146199 4.92477711251 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.37062346777 2.65546596893 127% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.573099415205 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 284.4 283.868780488 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 163.347958529 43.030603864 380% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 158.666666667 112.824112599 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.5 22.9334400587 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 5.23603664747 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0433809193283 0.215688989381 20% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0138314135118 0.103423049105 13% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0309279808373 0.0843802449381 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0628645093568 0.15604864568 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108884524199 0.0819641961636 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.1 13.2329268293 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 61.2550243902 56% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 10.3012195122 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.32 11.4140731707 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.