The pie charts show the average consumption of food in the world in 2008 compared to two countries; China and India.
The pie charts given provides information about how much food were consumed over the world in the year of 2008 by comparing the shares of India and China.
Overall, what stands out from the charts is that the processed food constituted the most significant part in both countries making this trend similar to the average of the world. However, nuts and seeds were considered as the least preferable type of food as most countries in the world, while chinese were least likely to use animal food.
Looking at the details, it is quite noticeable that in India, nuts and seeds were not mostly used as the other types of foods constituting 11% which was approximately three as much as the share of world shares and 8 % less than that of China. However, processed food was the mostly used type over the world, including India and China, with 41%, 39%, and 34% respectively.
Regarding the remaining types of food, what is remarkable for charts is that the percentages of animal food in the World and India were nearly equal being almost 10% higher than that in China. Finally, the proportion of vegetables and fruits in China accounted for 32% which was 3% higher than world avarage while that in India was 2% less than the quarter of the all types of food.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, however, if, look, regarding, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1042.0 965.302439024 108% => OK
No of words: 221.0 196.424390244 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7149321267 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40280589705 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 106.607317073 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52036199095 0.547539520022 95% => OK
syllable_count: 306.9 283.868780488 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 22.4926829268 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 33.685217493 43.030603864 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.857142857 112.824112599 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.5714285714 22.9334400587 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.28571428571 5.23603664747 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.313114894994 0.215688989381 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.169513512864 0.103423049105 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0803115430228 0.0843802449381 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216779534951 0.15604864568 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0772304810084 0.0819641961636 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.2329268293 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.93 61.2550243902 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.63 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.9970731707 131% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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