it is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sports or music and others are not. it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician.
discuss both these views and give your own opinion
What is talent? And why it is always a topic for debate? Some people think that talent is an absolute gift, but others believe that dedicated training and hard work are the secret behind every talent. In this paragraph we are going to discuss those two points of view.
Most of people believe that talent is something idiopathic and manifest suddenly without any alarm. They think that talent stays dormant in DNA and appears suddenly through childhood. Some people even believe that talent can be inherited. For example: Messi a great football player who is believed to be gifted. Picasso a spectacular painter his art works is outstanding and people called him genius.
In the contrary, other people think that talent is nothing related to miracles and god's gifts. It is all about hard work and dedicated training. They believe that any type of work, art or science can be learnt and anyone can be a great person without extraordinary abilities. This is what they think about talent, For instance Ronaldo the foot player who reached a great place in football world and placed his name among the talented players only with his continuous training.
There are also some people think about talent in a different way. They say that talent is a combination between gift and hard work. A gift without development and rational way of thinking is useless also hard-working without a spark of intelligence always goes in vain.
In my opinion we can not agree or disagree with any of those opinions above because, each one of them have a realistic point. You can see talent once a gift and in another case you can see it only a continuous hard work. It was a topic of debate and it will remain that way until a scientific based study proves which theory is correct.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'Most of', you should use 'the' ('Most of the people') or simply say ''Most people''.
Suggestion: Most of the people; Most people
...g to discuss those two points of view. Most of people believe that talent is something idiopa...
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Line 4, column 47, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a different way" with adverb for "different"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...are also some people think about talent in a different way. They say that talent is a combination ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, for example, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1457.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74592833876 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43667368474 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.537459283388 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.2437197221 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.6842105263 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1578947368 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.10526315789 7.06120827912 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160528225784 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0565192594927 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0524635647947 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0985535447301 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0485424187831 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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