You are relocating to a new city. Write a letter to an agent to arrange a house for you and your family.
When and why you are relocating?
What kind of house do you want?
Dear Sir/ Madam,
I am writing to ask about temporary accommodation in Surat as I have received a transfer in my workplace for 2 years and I will be moving to Surat with my family on the 10th of June.
I am working as a Senior Accountant in PMG from last 3 years at Mumbai branch. Recently I have been given promotion and transfer at Surat branch, so I, along with my family will have to move at Surat. I have to join Surat branch from 15 July, therefore, I along with my family will reach there by 10.
Basically, I am looking for a place near schools as I have two children age 8 and 10, which will be convenient for them. Moreover, a place which has quick access to transportation will be an added benefit since our family members do a lot of traveling. Furthermore, a 2 bhk flat with vehicle parking will be more convenient for us. Last but not least, a calm neighborhood will be an ideal place for me and my family.
I would be very much appreciated if you could find a suitable place with the above-mentioned particulars.
Hoping for your positive reply
Yours faithfully
John Patel.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir/ Madam, I am writing to ask about temporary acco...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, look, moreover, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 907.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 203.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.46798029557 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7646134766 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610837438424 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 277.2 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 37.8914238318 44.8134815571 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.7 76.5299724578 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3 16.8248392259 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.1 4.34317383033 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0820805757384 0.216113520407 38% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0383684141888 0.0766984524023 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0336439923339 0.0603063233224 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0552516024517 0.12726935374 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0350676635018 0.0580467560999 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 8.37731958763 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.65 8.71597938144 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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