Some people participate in extracurricular activities such as volunteering in charitable events or joining dance groups to gain more knowledge and experience others simply focus on their goals such as academic subjects or work which do you think helps in improving a person's knowledge and experience? use specific reasons and details to support you answer
If person wants to become successful, achieve be on each their goals then many factors and depend on it. Myriad people to take part in extra curricular activity like, join singing, dancing,martial art, yoga classes, work in NGO for charitable trust on the other hand, some frocks only focus on their particular goals. In paragraph to come I will tell which one is better option as well as describe ample reason and uphold my opinion.
To comments with, extra curricular activities play significant role in our life. we can learn manifold moral value from it. Plethora populations joint many classes is according to their interest. In addition, these activities, we can learn lots of skill such as, team spirit, teamwork, co-operation, increase thinking ability as well as gain profound knowledge. Furthermore, some people are participate in charitable events, event event management or attend. Some seminars so this all activity increase our communication skill concentration power awareness level diminish our stage fear.
at another and of spectrum some sections of population believe that we should be focus on one thing as study or job or business is whatever we do .Because they deem that other activities can district us and keeps away from our goals .It is certainly true but i think we should take part on some activities. For instance ,as student, academic studies are vital for them but many skills are also needed for better future which are not provide in schools. People can easily bore when they do thing one task perpatual so for relaxation these activities work as a stress reliever.
To Recapitulate, many skills are essential to become a multi-personality human being. We can learn these all skills through various kinds of activities. As per my perspective participate on many co-curricular activities is better option than focus on one thing.
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Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, then, well, for instance, i think, in addition, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1568.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15789473684 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88013662534 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615131578947 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.8935225373 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.533333333 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2666666667 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.86666666667 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212792440835 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0631952077397 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0582468675151 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122553324358 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0452456017705 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.