In the past, most people lived in small villages where everyone knew everyone else. Nowadays, most people live in large cities where they only know a few people in their area. What do you think were the advantages and disadvantages of living in small community?
Few decade age, a number of people lives in rural areas and towns and all people have strong bounding’s. However, today masses migrate in large towns . In my opinion, i think that nowadays urban areas provide more facilities than drawbacks .
On the one hand, people have more opportunities regarding employment and their career in cities. They can find better job according to their study, because multinational companies are situated in urban area. These companies provide employment with good salary. As well as higher education available for student who's want to do something in their life. For instance , Universities are mostly situated in cities, because cities provide good transportation. In this way they cannot face any difficulties for commuting.
further discussing the same, cities develop human living stranded they can gain good medical aid in serious illness. Advanced hospitals are available in this area. people are more aware about health related problems in cities, because they are more literate. In addition to this, sports clubs are available in these areas and this institutions organize sports activities and it is very beneficial for build career in sports. In this way everyone get more chances for personal development.
Admittedly, there are some basic disadvantages of living in cities. Large number of people resident in cities so they are suffers from living place. There are more population and less space for building new houses. Moreover, cities have more traffic and it is a cause of environment pollution. it's have drastic impact on human body and they suffer from critical diseases.
In conclusion, although urban areas have some drawbacks because have have hectic schedule and they are not able to build strong relation between people, but people gain more facilities in urban areas and it is very beneficial for individual overall development.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, well, for instance, i think, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1604.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40067340067 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76124770509 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56228956229 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 516.6 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.3255744815 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.2 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.85 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214470282018 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0662150321852 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0631055105096 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127309042607 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0420286192679 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.45 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.