2)Some people like to travel with a companion. Other people prefer to travel alone.
Which do you prefer?
Traveling is an ineffable way to amuse, work and know new people and cultures. It is always an enhancement experience for people of all ages who seek any of these approaches. It is believed that traveling is a pivotal factor that increases knowledge and overall word’s vision in every traveler. I prefer to travel with somebody, a friend or relative, rather than alone. I feel this way for the following reasons.
Firstly, traveling with another person is cheaper. This is because when we travel with someone else, we can share the costs of the travel such as when we purchase a meal in a restaurant or pay for the taxi bill. Moreover, a room for two people is more affordable than a single room. My own experience demonstrates this concept, last year I made two trips for the same place. One time I was alone and the other I went with a friend. I realize that the cost of travel diminishes, therefore, it was much more affordable when I went with a companion.
Secondly, in some aspects traveling alone is not safe. Many situations are more advantageous and safer to be with a company. For example, if we get sick alone who will help us or send notices to our relatives? Or when we are full of bags and requiring to obtain some information or to go to the bathroom, who will help us to deal with this? I think that is always safer and more comfortable to be with someone when we are traveling.
Finally, it is more amusing to travel with friends and relatives on vacation, for instance. Having a lot of people around to go out and explore all the new incredible places and innovative experiences are much more exciting for me. For example, when I went to an aquatic park alone it was so boring and deleterious to my humor because I went in all toys with people that I did not know and I feel awful.
To sum up, I strongly prefer to travel with a companion. This is because it is cheaper, safer and much more enjoyable.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 253, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'obtaining'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: obtaining
... when we are full of bags and requiring to obtain some information or to go to the bathro...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, for instance, i feel, i think, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1586.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 353.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.49291784703 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65006253071 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.487252124646 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 519.3 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.7552780621 48.9658058833 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.5238095238 100.406767564 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8095238095 20.6045352989 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.38095238095 5.45110844103 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283563421325 0.236089414692 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0958487895549 0.076458572812 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0871376668934 0.0737576698707 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175968044163 0.150856017488 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0590100830978 0.0645574589148 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 11.7677419355 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.47 10.9000537634 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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