3)Some people like to travel with a companion. Other people prefer to travel alone.
Which do you prefer?
Traveling is an ineffable way to amuse, work and meet new people and cultures. It is always an enhancement experience for people of all ages who seek any of these alternatives. It is believed that traveling is a pivotal factor that increases knowledge and overall word’s vision in every traveler. I prefer to travel with somebody, a friend or relative, rather than alone. I feel this way for the following reasons.
Firstly, traveling with another person is frugal. This is because when we travel with someone else, the costs of the travel can be shared such as food purchase in a restaurant or the payment of the taxi bill. Moreover, a room for two people is more affordable than a single room. My own experience demonstrates this concept, last year I made two trips for the same place. One time I was alone and the other I went with a friend. I realize that when I went with a companion, the cost of the travel diminishes, therefore, it was much more affordable.
Secondly, in some aspects traveling alone is not safe. In many situations are more advantageous and safer to be with a company. For example, if a lone traveler gets sick it would be difficult for others to notice it and help them or send notices to their relatives. Or when the lone traveler is full of bags and requiring to obtain some information it would be another complex situation for them. I think that is always safer and more comfortable to be with someone when we are traveling.
Finally, it is more amusing to travel with friends and relatives on vacation, for instance. Having a lot of people around to go out and explore all the new incredible places and innovative experiences are much more exciting for me. For example, when I went to an aquatic park alone it was so boring and deleterious to my humor because I went in all toys with people that I did not know and I feel awful.
To sum up, I strongly prefer to travel with a companion. This is because it is cheaper, safer and much more enjoyable.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 322, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'obtaining'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: obtaining
... traveler is full of bags and requiring to obtain some information it would be another co...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, for instance, i feel, i think, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1633.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 358.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.56145251397 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68197884365 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.502793296089 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 537.3 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.012653349 48.9658058833 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.7619047619 100.406767564 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0476190476 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.38095238095 5.45110844103 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.309313041936 0.236089414692 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102424645078 0.076458572812 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.084364738143 0.0737576698707 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188477700146 0.150856017488 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0491998177489 0.0645574589148 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 11.7677419355 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.87 10.9000537634 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 86.8835125448 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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